The writer took risks in writing: This was somewhat difficult to do. In the beginning, I said that I would want to write more complex sentences, but that did not go over too well. I tried to write one, and the peer reviewer said that the sentence was a 'run on'. After that, I decided to give up that feat, and write like I always have. I guess I chickened out in that regard.
The writer uses the word, 'bubbler' in the paper. I definitely took advantage of this, in this sentence: "Handwritten feedback is almost as archaic as the old-fashioned 'bubbler,' so it is time for faculty to utilize modern practices in giving feedback." I think this sentence works well!
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