I think that I have a pretty good draft this time, and hope that we get time for feedback from classmates. For my latest trick, I decided to take a new approach and begin with a semi-anecdote. I gave a brief little story of how the traditional classroom evolved into this online, technological monster!
I also tried to tighten up my writing by stating my exact meanings and using good word choice.
Paragraph headings helped me to somewhat organize my thoughts better. While I do have a hand-written, scratched up outline, the headings helped me to stay on course.
The last thing that I am waiting on is an online article that the librarian has to send me from ERIC. I have tried 3 different colleges and cannot get this article in my hand...uuuggghh.
Finally, I took a fresh look at some of my references and added a few more! I can only hope that I am getting closer to the end.
GN (I recently learned that that means, Good Night!)
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